"Synopsis they are" is ungrammatical. If you mean the plural of "synopsis" here---as your verb "are" indicates---it's spelled "synopses".I'm just politely ignoring "Miss Snarks rules" because I know that some people who can't figure out where to use apostrophes pretend to crusade against them. Question for a future post: How do people who can't write English get to be agents? Oh wait. You're not an agent. You work in...what? Agriculture? Ah, of course. Shovelling sh**, no doubt.;)DTG Pussy Talk
So I clicked on the site to see who was up in arms about Miss Snark (joining a long list of the disgruntled).
Well, like I said earlier. Sex scenes are very hard to write well. Very hard.