Recently promoted to sergeant in a mercenary company, Fritz has very little leadership experience. But when a shipwreck leaves him in an unknownland with two soldiers, Gerhard and Yakob, he must take command for the three of them to stay alive. Leading these two
proves quite a challenge; Gerhard lacks discipline, while Yakob has a habit of talking to a woman that
only he can see.
The three soldiers find themselves in an empire on the brink of civil war. A group of sorcerers who act as secret police hold the empire together, keeping the world under the surveillance of stones that sprout eyes. When Gerhard displays a strange ability to disbelieve magic out of existence, Fritz and his men find they have blundered into a war without knowing
which side is wrong, which side is right, or most importantly, which side offers them the best chance of living to spend their pay.
Fritz lands on a desert island, suddenly in charge of Gerhard and Yakob. They've landed in a empire on the brink of civil war. The empire is controlled by sorcerers and the team suddenly finds Gerhadr can... what?? "disbelieve magic out of existence"??
I can polish it right till then cause after that doesn't make sense. It sounds like a two year old who hides under her blankie thinking if she can't see Grandmother Snark, Grandmother Snark can't see her either.
Then of course, you've got the by now famous kick line of Nameless Faceless and Boring, the Evil Triplets.
Focus. Start again.