Water has the power to slake thirst, quench fire and nourish -- or destroy -- life. And one unconventional young woman possesses this power...
Creating and controlling water comes as naturally to Kila O’Conner as wielding a sword. But why she is the only one in her humble village with these special talents is a mystery, even to her.
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A stranger’s arrival triggers events that unveil Kila’s true identity. She is the daughter of a warrior Queen and King of another world, the Sky Lands, where four unique races create and control fire, water, earth, and air using flowers and herbs. Sixteen years ago, the Skeleton King swept through the Sky Lands on conquest, murdering her parents and many others, and forcing
Kila into exile.
Now the Skeleton King has returned, and not only wants the Sky Lands, but Kila’s death: She is the only one bold enough to defy him. Kila must avenge her parents and defend the Sky Lands. But assurances of friendship veil true feelings of deceit. Can Kila survive to unite her people and defeat the enemy?
This is unfocused. Is she living in Sky Lands? If she is why do you call her parents "queen and king of another world". If she's NOT in sky lands why does she give a fig about what happens to a place she doesn't know. Nameless faceless evil is boring; so is unexplained altruism. Give her some stakes in the game. Why does the Skeleton King want to kill her?
You've got events but I've got no idea what this story is about.