Snow Jordan’s husband is no ordinary soldier, and when he is killed in Afghanistan, he doesn’t stay dead. Julius is drawn back into the world of the Fae and all its political shenanigans. His wife is kidnapped, his father murdered, his brother turned mad, and Julius is injured so badly his heart becomes weak. If he doesn’t find the hand behind his troubles his death will become real.
From a peaceful acreage in Alberta, Canada, Snow is flung into a world of magic and mayhem. When it sinks in that the Fae are real and that her husband is a shapeshifter, her world is turned upside down. Undaunted, she fights for her sanity and her husband’s life against fantastic creatures and godlings.
Is Julius her husband? And if she's fighting for him, will he come back to life, or does she float off into the world of the Fae with him as a modern version of Persephone?
You've got the idea of a hook down right but it doesn't work because there's no sense of who the antagonist is. It's a faceless "world of Fae" and much as I adore political shenanigans and mayhem of any sort, I still want some specifics.