“A woman’s life can be measured by much, but for me it is this, men and children. The ones I’ve had and the ones I’ve lost.” Small pieces of cloth are sewn together to create intricate quilts and in LIFE REMNANTS, simple fragments of existence connect lives. Regrets involving sex, family, and unforgettable loss reveal that for some, true human connection is impossible, and even terrifying.
I'm not sure what this is but it's not a hook.
See the post what you need in a hook and revise.