AUCTIONING ANNA is the first novel about dating services that charge exorbitant amounts – unless you’re female. Anna (aka Adrianna) is sucked into this comical world. Imagine BERGFORF BLONDES with deeper highlights. (your hook starts here) Optimistic but naïve, Anna’s an aspiring actress who needs a backbone – now. Her father tears her heart apart and her boyfriend tramples on the remains, so she goes for the gold: millionaires in their golden years. Bob, with his aging Pro-Bowl biceps, makes her fancy a life without waiting tables, but is it No Strings or G-strings? When the media mistakes her for an escort, her life shatters in humorous ways. She feels like Monica Lewinsky locked in a revolving closet of blue dresses…until notoriety saves her life.
Here's the starting point:
X is the main guy;
Y is the bad guy;
they meet at Z and all L breaks loose.
If they don't solve Q, then R starts and if they do it's Lsquared.
From that make changes and adjustments to reflect your story and your style. A good solid hook needs all of those elements.