HH Com 365

When Tabitha Nelson's friend and mentor Rebecca is murdered, Tabitha's grief and confusion are intensified by the dream she had the night of Rebecca's death. In the dream, Tabitha entered a strange house, and saw a woman's body posed by the front door... just as Rebecca's body was posed.

As the people Tabitha loves are killed one by one, each found dead in the same way as they appear in Tabitha's dreams, she is drawn further and further into the house of her dreams... but will she find a nightmare in the final room?

well, ok, check "make friends with Tabitha" off the list of things to do in the new year.

This isn't a hook it's a description of action.

Start over. Suspense has to have an antagonist.


shelby said...

I need some more information about Tabitha. Who is she? What does she do? Why does she need a mentor? How old is she? Why should I care? and so forth.

This hook is just too general for me to get a sense of the story.

December Quinn said...

The premise interests me, but is Tabitha killing them somehow, or is she just psychic? Who's after her family and friends?

I'd love to know, because I do love psychic mystery stuff.

Lol Miss S!

Anonymous said...

Sounds interesting. I would check this out.