Cathleen Carrington is happily married, runs her own business, and enjoys a good life, but she’s never been able to forget her past. When her husband loses his job, and her mother becomes critically ill, she’s finally able to return to her hometown. There, she searches
for the grave of her One True Love, and literally awakens the ghosts of her past. Now she must choose between the man she married, AND the one who died twenty years before.
This isn't a hook. It's description of plot.
There's a huge flaw in the logic here if you want her to be sympathetic: she's happily married so when her husband loses his job she leaves him to go to her home town (where I assume the sick mother is)?
And are you really telling me her dillemma is choosing between a ghost and real guy. I mean unemployed is one thing but the guy isn't non-corporeal.
and "finally able" implies a barrier of some sort...what?