Two sisters, both alike in vanity, in fair California where we lay our scene… (ahh..Verona California, such a lovely spot)
Paige Miller has always been the responsible one. But while reeling from a devastating break-up, Paige decides to let loose and experiment—a decision which ultimately results in a host of unsuitable suitors, far too much alcohol consumption, and the title “Ho of the Year.”
Marisa Miller is a flighty New Age lesbian who’s allergic to commitment. But when Marisa finds herself homeless, jobless and on the road to single motherhood, suddenly a little security doesn't sound so bad.
Spilled Perfume is a story of sex, sisters and killer scents.
You've probably got a good story here but there's not a hook. And the R&J reference..if you use a phrase that's so clearly lifted you'd better continue the motif. It's the Chekhov's gun rule.