In a crowded nightclub in SoHo, Vincent Walker works up the courage to introduce himself to a beautiful stranger named Raine. Right away he realizes he will never be able to walk away from her. What he doesnt know is shes about to change his life forever by ending it.
But death is not the end, and Vincent is changing. He is becoming Chosen, which is the ancient, formal name for the race otherwise known as vampire. Terrified, he tries to find Raine, but she has disappeared. During his search he is captured by the Council of Thirteen, rulers of the Chosen world. There he learns she has broken one of the Councils oldest and most sacred laws; she has created another vampire without permission. Him.
Not wanting to risk one of their more valuable servants, the Council gives Vincent a choice. Either he finds her and brings her to justice, or he will be turned into a Lost One a vampire unable to feed, yet unable to die, his body destined to rot and fester for centuries. With nothing left to lose, Vincent agrees, although he has no intention of fulfilling his part of the bargain.
But he is not the only one looking for Raine. Something else, something driven by a century-old vendetta, hunts them both. Vincents only hope is to find her first and disappear, but he is coming to embrace the evil inside him. Already he wonders if he will save her, or kill her himself.
Yea, those clubs in Soho really will be the death of you yet.
There's too much explanation. Focus and be specific.
I don't read enough vampire stories to know for sure but this doesn't sound too..pardon the word choice...fresh and new.