Gwen Callahan, a successful career woman, (with and overactive imagination), envisions her life as a fairy tale. It is too bad that every guy she dates is far from her knight in shining armor. When she meets Thomas, a performing knight at a Chicago medieval dinner theater, it appears all of her dreams have come true. He is everything she had hoped for: gallant, polite, and looks good in chain mail too. As their fledging relationship continues, he sends her in a direction that even her imagination couldn’t foresee. Is it finally her happily ever after coming true, or has gallantry been taken to extreme?
Complete with swords, whores, coffee, stores, men on horseback, and even a wicked witch (of sorts) too. In her obsession to find a modern day knight, she finds herself fighting her way out of a modern day fairy tale and discovers—the hard way—that true valor can be found without armor and swords.
This isn't a hook, it's an idea. She meets a guy..then what? Be specific. And you've got to define what the obstacles are.