Winter is late coming to Galidan. The small folk speak of dark omens and impending doom while the nobles celebrate Yule with lavish balls. But the winds are stirring that threaten not only to tear the powerful nation apart but loyal families like the Granges. Ben Grange, the middle and mysterious son of Duke Grange finding himself at odds with his brother James, the loyal knight Jeremy Fields and sorcerer-in-training Peter Meadows share a destiny in the north where discord rumbles in every conversation and action. The princess Isabella watches her father rule with a weak hand under the influence of a nefarious Eastern duke and his sleazy son while Kat Grange’s whole world is turned upside down as she is left alone to dance on the winds of destiny alone. Around these six young people, winter’s winds bluster and reveal secrets to each of them, secrets that could not only help keep Galidan together but the whole world.
You've got four too many people mentioned here; five if one of them isn't the bad guy.
This is a mess. Start over.