Allow me to introduce Rebecca Jane MacDonald.
Rebecca has been an actress, a thief and an assassin. Now she is a recluse with a passion for extreme sports. Her only family is her grandmother, Annie MacDonald. Someone is playing games with Rebecca and a contract has been placed on Annie's life. Drawn back into a world of death and deceit, Rebecca is faced with a riddle. Who is Annie MacDonald and why has her grandmother's past become tangled up with her own?
Rebecca wants to get Annie to a place of safety but Annie is not co-operating. As if it's not enough that she has to neutralise three killers, explore her grandmother's murky past and find the man behind the contract; she also has to cope with a feisty grandmother who wants a piece
of the action! Rebecca Jane MacDonald is seriously riled and looking for a fight.
First she has the minor problem of getting her grandmother out of police custody. It appears that Annie MacDonald has a few lethal skills of her own.
A recluse with a passion for extreme sports? What..she rock climbs in her attic? This just doesn't make sense.
You're covering the same ground in all three paragraphs: granny is a pistol and Rebecca has a problem. Move on. Let us know who the bad guys are.