Loyalty should be treated as a precious thing, not used to manipulate and emotionally abuse. Haunted by a promise made to her dying mother, Zani Best has become the doormat of her family. But, when Zani's brother persuades her father to become involved in insider-trading, a chain of events is set in motion that will change her forever.
Someone is leaking secrets about Sunberri's soon-to-be-released computer game. If much more is revealed the game will be ruined and the company will be pushed to the verge of bankruptcy. Zani’s father has invested every penny he possesses in the computer games giant, if the leaks aren’t stopped, he’ll lose everything. Leaving her own small business to fend for itself, Zani reluctantly goes undercover as a PA, to find the mole. Top of her list is Corbin de Villers, her new boss. Corbin, who is carrying out his own investigation, soon realises that his secretary is not all that she says. Despite this, Zani’s elusiveness fascinates him, and he becomes determined to understand why shadows perpetually lurk in her eyes.
Crisis follows crisis, Zani’s father loses everything, and her brother disappears, leaving behind a £15million debt to the Russian mafia. It's up to Zani to save her family, even though it means she must dismantle her past. Slowly the acid self-hate that plagues her is replaced by a burgeoning self-confidence, and Zani discovers the happiness she thought she didn’t deserve.
Your hook starts in paragraph two and ends 101 words later. If you blather all the plot, you've lost any ounce of suspense.